Talk:Delta Epsilon Psi
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[edit] Mission Statement
I believe that the mission statement should be converted to lower case (more readable, also looks like shouting in current form). Would this be a problem for the fraternity? --Midnightcomm 03:17, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
- thats ok... but the spacing has to the way it is.... thats the way the mission statement was intended to be seen.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 68.238.151.79 (talk • contribs) .
[edit] Creed
24.174.7.183 believes that the creed is "not public info".[1] I have no way of verifying that statment. I reverted once to keep the creed, however that was removed by an anonymous user. Midnightcomm 01:20, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Neutrality and Language
is a problem here. Sounds like it was written by the Frat's publicity officer. I've added {{npov}} and {{inappropriate person}}. Xdenizen (talk) 00:14, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
I dont think it is overly partial. it is not like we are making any outlandist claims. please let me know when the neutrality becomes a problem and i will fix it.
[edit] External Liks
Should we be allowed to keep them since they are marked external links. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.162.42.155 (talk) 20:01, 16 January 2008 (UTC) They could stay if they had significance, however, chapter links violate WP:DIRECTORY. Justinm1978 (talk) 20:07, 16 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Reverting single comma insert in mission statement
Patrolling recent changes, I noticed someone had inserted a comma after "We" in "We the brothers of Delta Epsilon Psi vow ..." NOTE: Comma not in official fraternity pdf there. AND if used, two commas would be necessary, "We, the brothers of Delta Epsilon Psi, vow ..." -- but that would not seem to be the correct formulation in this case. Proofreader77 (talk) 18:25, 10 March 2008 (UTC)