Talk:Defense Security Service

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[edit] Advertisement

I disagree that this article needs to be rewritten. It is clearly not an advertisement. It is simply a subject about which there may not be much public knowledge or interest. More than likely it is taken straight from an "about" page on the DSS website. Until someone has additional information about this topic, it will probably remain like this. I feel the advertisement tag should be removed.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Anarchyson (talk • contribs) 17 Nov 2007

I think part of the problem was that the content was taken almost verbatim from the DSS website, so it did sound like it was "tooting their horn", so to speak. I've just done a rewrite which hopefully addresses this, and removed the tag. If others feel it still needs work, by all means put the tag back, but please add some specific comments here. —DragonHawk (talk|hist) 00:01, 9 December 2007 (UTC)