Talk:Deep Web Technologies

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hangon done with permission. however, eager for guidance. this is a third level page from Open source intelligence, am trying keep the advertising problem under control while creating informative lists of representative sources, softwares, and services.

Will be at the meeting in Boston, for now I simply wanted to set up a template with a few examples that other vendors could follow. What do you suggest? Robert Steele 20:43, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

Well, for one thing, rewriting so that it is neutral. The way the article is now, it stands out that it was copied from somewhere with sentences that begin with "we" to describe what the subject does. Also take the time to make sure the article is formatted the way you think it is; MediaWiki removes single line breaks, if you want to make a list you'll want to use the proper notation, such as * for a bulleted list or # for a numbered list. Also don't forget to wikilink to other relevant articles, such as Internet. I don't have time at the moment but I'll try to remember to come back later this evening and take a stab at a rewrite. -- Hawaiian717 23:42, 5 July 2006 (UTC)