User talk:Dcollard
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[edit] Entrecote pieces
Your pieces on these reads like an advertorial - I have heavily trimmed them to make them neutral. Please don't post what reads like an advert for these - or the pieces will be edited back down. Neutral and factual is fine - puff and adverts are not. Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! (Whisper...) 09:48, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Comment
I have re-edited the pieces and combined them as a single article. The material wasn't intended as an advert. In fact, the restaurants are indeed iconic in Paris and Geneva, and I have found that a great many regular patrons are unaware of the connection between them, or their shared history. That is why I assembled the material. Dcollard 07:53, 23 December 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks - looks a lot neater! Happy New Year Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! (Whisper...) 18:13, 27 December 2006 (UTC)
- Thank you for writing up this article. You've solved the mystery of the competing restaurants for me! Nelson 10:30, 14 May 2007 (UTC)