Talk:David Soares

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This needs significant editing. I feel I have a COI, as I was the first Democratic committeeman to endorse him in the primary, volunteered on his campaign, and consider him a friend. If nobody else will work on it after a month or so, then I'll jump in. Bearian 01:04, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

I edited out some nonsense about being interviewed by someone. I was there, so at the risk of making original research, the deleted paragraph was mostly nonsense. I welcomed the unnamed editor. Bearian 20:51, 11 June 2007 (UTC)

P.S. Peter Schmitz-Morfe is a teenager from Albany, see [1], so it's plausible the kid did interview him, but it's not a notable event. Bearian 20:54, 11 June 2007 (UTC)

[edit] A minor clean-up

As it stood, whether or not the subject has Wikipedia's grade of notability, and whether or not acceptable sources are given, the article's grammar, repetitions and lack of coherent writing needed a clean-up. If the subject, a public official with some power, ever looked at "his" WP article how could he not have wanted the mishmash to be rewritten subito pronto.--SilasW 21:55, 27 August 2007 (UTC)