Talk:David Guzman

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[edit] What's with the informal language

"David is having a very fun time with his girlfriend Amanda Wilson" does not sound appropriately formal to me for being on an encyclopeadia. The whole article is written in a way you would expect of someone whjo knows David Guzman personally gushing over him, ie. in a very friendly way. Desperately needs to be re-written.Avman M 21:02, 8 July 2007 (UTC)