Talk:DAV Jawahar Vidya Mandir, Shyamali
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the best school of jharkhand
[edit] List of SRC members?
- For the inclusion of list of SRC members, reference has to be cited.
- Only those people can be listed who are well known and have a wikipedia article about them.
Mayank Abhishek 08:52, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Clean-up
- Per request: Much of the information in the article is India-centric, meaning that most English speakers from other parts of the world will unlikely be able to understand the article.
- For example: "CBSE pattern is offered from Nursery to Std XII. There are 7 sections named A-G in each class till Class Xth." I have no clue what CBSE is, nor do I understand Std XII or Class Xth. "MECON, Ranchi." -- I could find nothing on MECON, although I assume Ranci refers to the capital of Jharkhand.
- "The school has a great history with a large number of alumni at important positions throughout the globe after pursuing higher education from institutes such as the Indian Institutes of Technology,Manipal Institute Of Technology, Indian School of Mines,Vellore Institute of Technology(VIT),BIT Mesra, NLSIU, NUJS, All India Institute of Medical Sciences, Armed Forces Medical College, Pune, National Institutes of Technology, Cochin University of Science and Technology, etc." doesn't say much, or at least not clearly, and the sentence tends to fall apart when we get to the laundry list.
- Wikilinks should be used whenever possible, and any acronyms should be spelled out.
- Finally, the article needs sources for various claims made therein.
- If you need any help feel free to ask. •Jim62sch• 19:52, 6 November 2007 (UTC)