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[edit] Drawing
Hay ive drawn a picture of daspletosaurus, you can see it on my personal page. I think its reasonably accurate its based of skeletal drawings. Is it possible i could add it to the artical? It may not be that usefull however. :) Steveoc 86 12:08, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
- The drawing is very good, just a few issues: one, can you remove the humans and text from the image? The humans are anachronistic and text, at least your signature, are not permitted for wiki images. Second, the description says "use with permission" but your have it tagged as Public Domain, which means anybody can use it for any reason without having to ask you. If you can clear these things up, I think it would be fine to include it. Dinoguy2 14:24, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the reply, I've uploaded a newer version. Can i keep the text 'Daspletosaurus..'? On the spinosaurus page the spino drawing has a real signature am I allowed to have one?(small in the corner)If not I remove all the text. The humans were just for scale but the article already has an image that shows that. thanks Steveoc 86 20:00, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
- ive acidently created a new picture file how do i remove the old one (i thought i had replaced it)?
- To replace a pic, you need to upload the new one with the exact same name. I think the only way to delete one is to nominate it for deletion like you would an article. Keeping the labe text is ok, as long as it's small and not too distracting, and I think 'drwan' sigs are usually ok if they're not obtrusive, but I'm not sure.Dinoguy2 22:22, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
- The image use policy says that if there’s text, then upload a text free version as 'It will help Wikipedians translate your image into other languages.' A signature is universal so that shouldn’t be a problem. I have shrunk and faided the tex on the 'english' version, were in the artical do you sugest it goes. thanksSteveoc 86 17:07, 19 March 2007 (UTC)
- To replace a pic, you need to upload the new one with the exact same name. I think the only way to delete one is to nominate it for deletion like you would an article. Keeping the labe text is ok, as long as it's small and not too distracting, and I think 'drwan' sigs are usually ok if they're not obtrusive, but I'm not sure.Dinoguy2 22:22, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
- ive acidently created a new picture file how do i remove the old one (i thought i had replaced it)?
- Thanks for the reply, I've uploaded a newer version. Can i keep the text 'Daspletosaurus..'? On the spinosaurus page the spino drawing has a real signature am I allowed to have one?(small in the corner)If not I remove all the text. The humans were just for scale but the article already has an image that shows that. thanks Steveoc 86 20:00, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Next FAC..
Gosh I know where the next FAC is comin' from....cheers, Cas Liber | talk | contribs 04:54, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] My opinion:
I've gone through the article & proof read it all - there weren't very many mistakes at all, but still a few things to work on. Overall, the article is very repetitive in regard to Daspletosaurus' relationship with other tyrannosaurids - it mentions its relations to T rex & Gorgosaurus in the opening, then again in comparison in Description, then again many times in Discovery & Naming, and then again in Paleobiology (where even a section is devoted to Gorgi) & then again in Paleoecology & Classification. By the end of the article I'm unaware whether I'm reading an article on Daspletosaurus, Gorgosaurus or an article devoted to the relationship between the two. This either needs to be edited out, stated in a couple of places or moved to the section in Paleobiology on the relationship between the two.
Next is the short paragraph side of things. Both the Description, Discovery & naming & Paleobiology sections have short paragraphs, as well as the opening. These need to be expanded. I experimented merging a couple of them, but it looked kind of silly. The opening sentence to the Paleobiology section looks out of place - a flimsy one sentence line - and needs to be deleted or expanded upon. Other than that, the article looks well on its way to being featured with the usual editing & polishing requirements. Cheers, Spawn Man 04:55, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- I don't think there are too many mentions of other tyrannosaurids at all (this may not be a surprise since I wrote most of it). There's a mention of its relationship to Tyrannosaurus and its coexistence with Gorgosaurus in the lead. Because the lead is supposed to summarize the article. Tyrannosaurus and Gorgosaurus are mentioned one time in the description section, in comparison, to help people tell otherwise very similar tyrannosaurs apart. Gosh, how terrible. It's mentioned again in "Classification and systematics" because if you're talking about an animal's evolutionary relationships, it might be a good idea to mention the animals that is actually related to. Gorgosaurus is mentioned one time in the entire Discovery section, in the (relevant) context that the holotype was thought to be a species of Gorgosaurus. Tyrannosaurus is mentioned in the Two Medicine section because Horner believes that species to be a link between Daspletosaurus and T. rex... that was how it was originally announced to the world back in 1992 (1991 if you count an abstract for SVP). Important? Yeah, pretty. The "Competition with Gorgi" section... well this is a hugely important part of the interest in Daspletosaurus, how it coexisted with another very similar tyrannosaur, something that is not seen anywhere else in the (published) fossil record. A half-dozen papers have been written about this, so maybe the subject deserves its own subheading. And then there's the faunal list at the bottom, of all the types of animals Daspletosaurus interacted with... Gorgi should be left out just because it's been mentioned a few times?
- I agree with you that the one-sentence Paleobiology lead is too short, but I wasn't sure what else to write there. Maybe someone can expand it. I think the length of the other paragraphs in the article are appropriate for their content, others may disagree. Sheep81 05:42, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
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- I'm not saying get rid of the Gorgi altogether, but the article is very much concentrated on the relationship between the two. Considering there is actually a section devoted to this relationship, there shouldn't be half as much on it outside that section, yet there is. It's basically overpowering & it's not really what you think Sheep, but what FAC voters think. I wasn't objecting to the mention in the lead as it is meant to be overviewing (I have written a couple of FA's ya know...), but this relationship is mentioned in every single section, whether briefly or not. As I said, most of this could quite easily be compressed into the section on the relationship. But *sigh*, you & I don't have a good track record of agreeing on things. Spawn Man 07:36, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- I just have no idea how you would go about removing Gorgosaurus from the systematics or paleoecology sections. It wouldn't make any sense. Sheep81 08:30, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- Er... I guess it's not in the systematics section anyway. Ha. Tyrannosaurus is though. Sheep81 08:36, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- Eleven mentions of Gorgosaurus in the article text, six in the "Gorgi" section and one in the lead which you have no problem with. The other four: compare a skull feature with Gorgi and Rex; note that the holotype was once considered a specimen of Gorgi; note that facial biting is also seen in Gorgi and Rex for context; and list Gorgi among the many animals that lived alongside Daspletosaurus. I don't understand how that is excessive. Please explain how this is "overpowering" and how you would like that to be trimmed without losing information.
- Er... I guess it's not in the systematics section anyway. Ha. Tyrannosaurus is though. Sheep81 08:36, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- I just have no idea how you would go about removing Gorgosaurus from the systematics or paleoecology sections. It wouldn't make any sense. Sheep81 08:30, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- I'm not saying get rid of the Gorgi altogether, but the article is very much concentrated on the relationship between the two. Considering there is actually a section devoted to this relationship, there shouldn't be half as much on it outside that section, yet there is. It's basically overpowering & it's not really what you think Sheep, but what FAC voters think. I wasn't objecting to the mention in the lead as it is meant to be overviewing (I have written a couple of FA's ya know...), but this relationship is mentioned in every single section, whether briefly or not. As I said, most of this could quite easily be compressed into the section on the relationship. But *sigh*, you & I don't have a good track record of agreeing on things. Spawn Man 07:36, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
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- Ten mentions of Tyrannosaurus in the article text, five in the Classification section and one in the lead which (I guess?) you have no problem with. The other four: compare a skull feature with Gorgi and Rex; identify the 2Med species as the one considered transitional between Dasp and Rex; use Rex as support for a hypothesis of Dasp ecology; note that facial biting is also seen in Gorgi and Rex for context. I don't understand how that is excessive either. Please also explain how this is "overpowering" and how you would like that to be trimmed without losing information. Sheep81 08:47, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
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- I feel your overprotectiveness of this article is clouding your judgement Sheepy. Stop defending defending defending, & try and relax! A couple of those mentions could easily be left off. heck, why not create a whole new article on the matter like species of Pssita & then link to the main article? Unless it's not that important in which case you could easily lose a few mentions? I'm not saying it's excessive, but the way it's spread throughout the whole article rather than in one or two condensed places is over powering. I'm not saying deleted everything on it, but rather place it in a single section or two. You probably get what I mean, but just want to argue because you've written most of the article...? Anyway, let it go if you want, but I'll bring it up at FAC when this article gets there - just thought you'd rather sort it out here rather than there. Cheers, Spawn Man 11:15, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- No, actually I have no idea what you mean. You claim that mentions of the coexistence of Gorgosaurus and Daspletosaurus are pervasive throughout the article. I have just finished showing you that their coexistence is not even mentioned outside of the Gorgi section and the lead, aside from one tiny little sentence at the bottom. The other 3 references to Gorgi are on completely unrelated topics. I laid this out explicitly just up there and your response is more of the same vague hand-waving. In fact, I guarantee you that if you didn't bring it up at FAC, nobody else would even notice this alleged pervasiveness. Am I protective of the article? Sure, it's hard not to be, but in no way am I overprotective in the sense that you mean. Many people have edited the article since I rewrote it, in fact I went out and solicited 3 or 4 different editors to come proofread it. The only reason I seem exasperated with you here is because you keep asserting something about the article that isn't even true. Sure, I could delete all (three!) of the mentions of Gorgi unrelated to its coexistence with Dasp, but why? It's good information that would be lost. Sheep81 20:50, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- FWIW I think the article is good in terms of the discussion of the other two predators. Co-existence with gorgi is covered in the lead, one other discussion and a one liner in the 2med. This is fine. Tyrannosaurus is a easy ref point for most people (especially kids) and is mentioned sufficiently. I don't think overly. I feel it is justified having a discussion on the competition with gorgi as this is really unusual to find two large predators partly co-existing and makes a fascinating read. I'm wondering how it'd look if it was just in Paleobiology directly. I'm not seeing anything too repetitive.cheers, Cas Liber | talk | contribs 21:10, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- You mean remove the "Competition with Gorgosaurus" subheading and just let that be the first thing under Paleobiology? That would allow the deletion of that one-sentence intro. Sheep81 21:34, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- FWIW I think the article is good in terms of the discussion of the other two predators. Co-existence with gorgi is covered in the lead, one other discussion and a one liner in the 2med. This is fine. Tyrannosaurus is a easy ref point for most people (especially kids) and is mentioned sufficiently. I don't think overly. I feel it is justified having a discussion on the competition with gorgi as this is really unusual to find two large predators partly co-existing and makes a fascinating read. I'm wondering how it'd look if it was just in Paleobiology directly. I'm not seeing anything too repetitive.cheers, Cas Liber | talk | contribs 21:10, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- No, actually I have no idea what you mean. You claim that mentions of the coexistence of Gorgosaurus and Daspletosaurus are pervasive throughout the article. I have just finished showing you that their coexistence is not even mentioned outside of the Gorgi section and the lead, aside from one tiny little sentence at the bottom. The other 3 references to Gorgi are on completely unrelated topics. I laid this out explicitly just up there and your response is more of the same vague hand-waving. In fact, I guarantee you that if you didn't bring it up at FAC, nobody else would even notice this alleged pervasiveness. Am I protective of the article? Sure, it's hard not to be, but in no way am I overprotective in the sense that you mean. Many people have edited the article since I rewrote it, in fact I went out and solicited 3 or 4 different editors to come proofread it. The only reason I seem exasperated with you here is because you keep asserting something about the article that isn't even true. Sure, I could delete all (three!) of the mentions of Gorgi unrelated to its coexistence with Dasp, but why? It's good information that would be lost. Sheep81 20:50, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- It's not reall that hard to comprehend what I'm saying Sheepy - The text on the relationship between Gorgi & Daspi is too overpowering & consumes a large portion of the text therefore giving an unbalanced feeling to the entire article. Not to hard was it now? Now, I also suggested a few ways to fix this - Delete a few of the mentions. Compress them into one or two sections, ie, the relationship between the pair section. Or, expand the other text around these mentions to eliminate the overpowering feeling. Again, not that hard. I'm sure you can easily acomplish one of those tasks; I'd probably choose the last one as it still benifits the article without deleting your precious Gorgi mentions. Sound good? Now if you'll stop going on about how my opinion is wrong, I'm sure I'll be able to support in any future FAC this article might have if you fix the problem. Cheers, Spawn Man 04:30, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
- I'm done. Through. You obviously aren't even reading what I write, just repeating the same thing over and over again. You say the text on the relationship is too overpowering, I point out that there are four whole sentences including the word Gorgosaurus outside of the relevant section and the lead, none of which lead to any discussion beyond those sentences. What do you say? The text on the relationship is too overpowering and consumes a large portion of the text. I point out that there IS NO TEXT ON THE RELATIONSHIP outside of the relevant section and the lead. What do you say in response? The text on the relationship between... and so on. So yeah, I'm over it. Sheep81 06:36, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
- I agree with Sheep, and in fact think there could be more on Das's relationship with other animals in its environment. That's what the paleobio/paleoeco section is for. Do you think there's too much discussion of gallery forests on Amphicoelias? The context in which an animal lived is often just as important as the animal itself, especially for prehistoric animals, where it is a rarity that we have so much published data and theories about the environmental context. Plenty of dinosaur articles have lines like "it lived along side such and such dinosaurs", which is a basically useless statement, because nobody ever studies how they interact. Here people have. It's interesting and relevent. Also, Spawn, I advise you to watch how you conduct yourself. Your tone is incredibly condescending and the implication that you won't support people's FACs unless they go along with your suggestions is pretty deplorable. This is not dirty politics, this is a frigging encyclopedia.Dinoguy2 06:58, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
- I'm done. Through. You obviously aren't even reading what I write, just repeating the same thing over and over again. You say the text on the relationship is too overpowering, I point out that there are four whole sentences including the word Gorgosaurus outside of the relevant section and the lead, none of which lead to any discussion beyond those sentences. What do you say? The text on the relationship is too overpowering and consumes a large portion of the text. I point out that there IS NO TEXT ON THE RELATIONSHIP outside of the relevant section and the lead. What do you say in response? The text on the relationship between... and so on. So yeah, I'm over it. Sheep81 06:36, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
- I feel your overprotectiveness of this article is clouding your judgement Sheepy. Stop defending defending defending, & try and relax! A couple of those mentions could easily be left off. heck, why not create a whole new article on the matter like species of Pssita & then link to the main article? Unless it's not that important in which case you could easily lose a few mentions? I'm not saying it's excessive, but the way it's spread throughout the whole article rather than in one or two condensed places is over powering. I'm not saying deleted everything on it, but rather place it in a single section or two. You probably get what I mean, but just want to argue because you've written most of the article...? Anyway, let it go if you want, but I'll bring it up at FAC when this article gets there - just thought you'd rather sort it out here rather than there. Cheers, Spawn Man 11:15, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
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- Gawsh Sheepy! No need to get all uptight about it. ;) I'm always condescending, but in a good way. I wasn't implying I wouldn't support any future FAC; no idea where you'd get that idea from. My opinion is my opinion - you certainly don't have to agree with it & you hardly do anyway. There's no need to gang p on me about it & say I'm being unreasonable. I think you calling me a dirty politician deplorable, but as I said, we all have our own opinions. Just so I can clarify, this text isn't in the Description section: "The orbit (eye socket) was a tall oval, somewhere in between the circular shape seen in Gorgosaurus and the 'keyhole' shape of Tyrannosaurus" - I mean do we really have to compare to Gorgi here? Do we really know the shape & size of Gorgi's teeth?? Most would answer no, so it's really not adding anything & if we don't know, what's the point of comparing to it? Other than that, I'm fine with the rest, but you said there was no other Gorgi references outside of the above mentioned ones. I didn't know you were getting all worked up about it Sheep, I thought we were having a civilised discussion. Saying something isn't hard to comprehend isn't being condescending - If you don't want my help, then fine, I won't give it. Just because you're the big paleontologist guy doesn't mean everyone else's opinions are wrong. This is your article remember, obviously I'm not wanted here. Spawn Man 07:28, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
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Well if you'll read what you wrote, you'll notice you didn't specify anyone else but me, so it's not hard to see how I might have thought you were dumping it all on me. I'm also not sure how else to read "I'm sure I'll be able to support in any future FAC this article might have if you fix the problem" other than how Dinoguy did. And I'm flabbergasted that when you said "The text on the relationship between Gorgi & Daspi is too overpowering & consumes a large portion of the text..." you were really only referring to one sentence in the entire article, since apparently you are fine with the rest. So maybe you just need to work on writing what you actually mean. That's all I'm gonna say. (shrug) Sheep81
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- You could read "I'm sure I'll be able to support in any future FAC this article might have if you fix the problem" as "melborp eht xif uoy fi evah thgim elcitra siht erutuf yna ni troppus ot elba eb ll'I erus m'I", but that's only if you read it backwards. You could also read it as, "I might not agree that the article be featured just yet due to this concern of mine"; I never knew not commenting on a FAC or opposing one was considered "dirty politics". Yes, I find that one sentence too overpowering for my pallete. At an aesthetic value, yes it did make the Gorgi info too overpowering. I don't really see your problem with deleting it etc. I mean, you only complained now about my pickiness, not the actual oppose itself. Shall I delete it if you have no problem with it? Cheers, Spawn Man 07:58, 12 June 2007 (UTC). P.S. "So maybe you just need to work on writing what you actually mean" - How condescending! (shrug)...
[edit] Taxobox question
Should we remove the "2 or 3 unnamed species" from the taxobox? Sheep81 06:23, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- Probably, this is discussed pretty throuoghly in the text. Aside from Quetzalcoatlus I can't think of any taxoboxes that list unnamed species, and that one is kind of a special case, since Qsp is far better known than Qn (why it hasn't been named after all these years is pretty baffling!). Dinoguy2 07:15, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Final bits
The article is looking good - I did muse on mentioning co-habitants Centrosaurus and Hypacrosaurus in the lead's final para...cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 22:18, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
- Like how? Sheep81 22:28, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
- I did a quick edit, but I want to concentrate on a separate project and am not doing any in-depth review for the time being (which, incidentally, is why i haven,t dared approach Bird yet).Circeus 22:52, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
Something like:
"While Daspletosaurus fossils are rarer than other tyrannosaurids, the available specimens allow some analysis of the biology of these animals, including social behavior, diet and life history. In some areas Daspletosaurus coexisted with another tyrannosaurid, Gorgosaurus, though there is some evidence of niche differentiation between the two. Other large animals (and potential prey) it shared its landscape with include the horned dinosaur Centrosaurus and the ornithopod Hypacrosaurus."
I did it with Steggy and Diplodocus just to give an added 'feel' of what other dinos were around for the kiddies..cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 22:56, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
PS: Anyone have a problem with widening the taxobox a bit as the image looks a bit tiny as is?cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 22:58, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
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- How's that now? I removed the picture width from the taxobox, now it just uses the default width. Sheep81 00:04, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
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- Yep - all good. I must say I am impressed at how comprehensively you can get from Go (stub) to Whoa (all info, double check, copyedit and a lick of boot polish) without a large amount from the rest of us. Congrats - ready to roll into FAC then? cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:08, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
- Heh, that is a good or a bad thing depending who you ask. I think it's ready but the peer review has only been open for like 24 hours, so... Sheep81 00:14, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
- Fair enough. See what happens.cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:23, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
- This artical has gotten really good, i cant find any unreferenced staitment. The only small and fairly unimportant thing i can think of is a popular culture section. the only program i know it was featured in was an episode of Dinosaur Planet.Steveoc 86 09:59, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
- Fair enough. See what happens.cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:23, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
- Heh, that is a good or a bad thing depending who you ask. I think it's ready but the peer review has only been open for like 24 hours, so... Sheep81 00:14, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
- Yep - all good. I must say I am impressed at how comprehensively you can get from Go (stub) to Whoa (all info, double check, copyedit and a lick of boot polish) without a large amount from the rest of us. Congrats - ready to roll into FAC then? cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:08, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
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