Talk:Darren Lehmann

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Contents 1 Infoboxes 2 POV 3 Other 4 highest score 5 POV and References 6 Structure

[edit] Infoboxes

I was wondering, with the two infoboxes, is there a good way to make one go directly below the other? I think that would look better than the way the article is now, but I can't figure out a way to do that. The only other way I can get them to go is one next to the other in a row, which just looks ugly in my opinion and doesn't leave enough room for the text. Can anyone help? Raven4x4x 07:22, July 19, 2005 (UTC)

You could put them both inside a pair of <div style="float:right;">...</div> tags. -- Ian ≡ talk 03:44, 22 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] POV

... that he would be one of the greatest of all time in another team/era?

... "not particularly quick"?????

Blnguyen 03:39, 14 December 2005 (UTC)

I agree, this is a bit too fawning to be encyclopedic. Perhaps I'll take a shot at cleaning it up. --Deville (Talk) 16:29, 28 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Other

The introduction states that lehmann took 6/92 against Sri Lanka, but the infobox states best bowling less than that - bit of a discrepancy Sinisterial

Section entitled first class success has info repeated Sinisterial

[edit] highest score

his highest score isnt 301*. its 302*.

[edit] POV and References

I have tagged all the facts I can find that need citations, and removed a lot of POV and weaselness. This article, as someone says above, fawned much over Lehmann and wasn't very well written in a number of areas. I have cleared as much of this away as I can, and updated it to the past tense where relevant as he has now retired. SGGH ^speak! 12:37, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Structure

This article lacks it. Sections are too long. As an aside, he finished with a century in his final South Australian first class and one-day state matches. 124.171.159.184 (talk) 06:52, 24 November 2007 (UTC)