Talk:Daniel Loss

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[edit] Review comments

Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
  • Basic biographical information required, including date and place of birth, education, other positions held (with dates)
  • Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
  • After expansion, article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
  • Information on research should be expanded and put into appropriate context. An explanation of the importance of his research, understandable by a non-specialist, would be useful
  • References should be expanded
  • I've added an external link which could be used to expand article

Espresso Addict 04:32, 19 July 2007 (UTC)