Talk:Dan Gibson
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[edit] NPOV Concerns
This article doesn't seem very neutral or encyclopaedic. Phrases such as "creating in all of us a deeper appreciation for the natural world in which we live" and "opened peoples’ eyes to both the beauty of nature and the need for its survival" are flowery, unnecessary, and add nothing to the article. This style is so intertwined with the informational content, however, that this article should probably be completely rewritten. It's not that there isn't any useful information, it just isn't presented like it should be. Also, the ending is rather abrupt. There should be some sort of conclusion. 74.36.127.18 19:25, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
