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[edit] dab

I disambiguated the second paragraph. Saying that the police officer murdered the gunman is grossly misleading, and possibly libelous. As the gunman had shot several people, and killed three, the police officer was merely carrying out his duties by killing the gunman. Rje 17:54, 9 Dec 2004 (UTC)

[edit] Removed Link

I removed the link to the Italian Black Label Society Chapter. Although Zakk Wylde & Dime were very closely associated, this link had nothing to do with this article or band. --66.222.240.194 19:51, 2 July 2006 (UTC)jay

[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Damageplan - New Found Power.jpg

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[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Damageplan - New Found Power.jpg

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BetacommandBot 05:57, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Vinnie Paul Abbott

Throughout the article "Vinnie Paul Abbott" is referred to simply as "Paul", which is strange to me because that is his middle name. I've never heard of him being called "Paul" before reading this article. 142.162.43.37 (talk) 18:12, 17 February 2008 (UTC) Abbott could refer to either of the brothers'. M3tal H3ad (talk) 05:53, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

I guess someone went in and changed Vinnie Paul Abbott's name to simply "Abbott" but as M3tal H3ad above said, this could refer to either brother as both their last names are Abbott. He was commonly referred to as "Vinnie Paul." This should be changed because in the article many times there is "Darrel and Abbott" worded when Darrel is an Abbott. It could create confusion. It should be worded as "Darrel and Vinnie Paul" or maybe even "Darrel and Vinnie," although I have only heard him called "Vinnie Paul." Feral Mind (talk) 03:35, 26 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] GA on hold

  • "While promoting the album at a concert on 8 December 2004, a former U.S. marine named Nathan Gale..." - it sounds like the Marine was promoting the album...
  • ref 1 - publisher is musicOMH (not musicohm...typo and all)
  • "A search for a vocalist ensued and a demo of the song "Crawl" was sent to former Halford guitarist Pat Lachman who auditioned for vocalist as Rob Halford rejoined Judas Priest" - needs commas/reword
  • "Christine Klunk of PopMatters commenting" - PopMatters doesn't go in italics
    • "Christine Klunk of PopMatters disliked" - again
  • "who were injured on December 8" - wlink date
  • "although declined the offer" - although --> but
  • "leading up to December 8" - again, wlink dates throughout

Leave a note on my talk page when done. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 23:46, 4 March 2008 (UTC)

passed. dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 02:12, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

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[edit] Genre(s)

I gave the genres in the infobox sources and added two genres (with sources!). I hope that's ok. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.173.11.119 (talk) 20:40, 17 May 2008 (UTC)