Talk:Dal LaMagna

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[edit] Desperately needs copyedit by someone knowledgable

"He the founder of the Progressive Government Institute (PGI)…" Or this, formatted as an entire sentence: "In 2005, the organization with the Backbone Campaign." I can't even make enough sense of that to try to fix it. - Jmabel | Talk 01:37, 31 October 2007 (UTC)