Talk:Cyberdrama

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I think your page is really good.  I like how your included pictures and titles.  Also, I think the contents part is good because you can click there and it will take you to which part of the article you want.--157.182.79.225 (talk) 18:49, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

This page is very well constructed. I find it useful that there are many links within the article. Great job! Erinrebeccalong (talk) 18:43, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

This is a very well thought out and planned article. I like all of the organization, and each heading makes the information easily accessible.Great job! Askeens (talk) 18:47, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

This is an amazing article and definitely appears to be a professional job. The format is amazing and the article provides all the useful knowledge that explains cyberdrama. You have definitely incorporated all types of resources that are available through wikipedia which testifies to your understanding of how wikipedia works and what makes a good article page. --Amurray8 (talk) 18:49, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

I would move the image down closer to where you discuss the Sims. Also, fix the references. Look at the Wikipedia formatting guide for information on references.--Sandybaldwin (talk) 18:53, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

This page looks great! I think that your group has a lot of information and detail on this topic. Its good that you have both pictures and subtopics within the page! good work!--Mblack2 (talk) 18:57, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

Hey guys good article my only advice would be to make it more succinct by either using more technical language or just put up some sub-categories for the things you need to elaborate on. Also great job with the links and content. Izivkovi (talk) 18:58, 28 February 2008 (UTC)