User talk:Culchie

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[edit] Re: Cairo Gang

Thank you for your message. I will take a look at your edits and let you know what I think. Cheers! ---RepublicanJacobiteThe'FortyFive' 15:33, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

It looks good for the most part. I made some minor fixes to spacing, but that is the sort of thing you'll get the hang of eventually. My only suggestion is that you modify the quote about Joe Dolan in Major King's room, in the Eastwood Hotel paragraph, because the quotation marks are unclear. It also needs rephrasing slightly---or just leave out the bit about his having "scourged" the mistress. This detail is of lesser importance anyway. Cheers! ---RepublicanJacobiteThe'FortyFive' 15:50, 27 March 2008 (UTC)