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[edit] GA Review
- Firstly, just as a note for the future, the GA reviewer generally creates this page... you just need to add the template to the talk page. :)
- "Singles released by the band and included on the album" - bleh... could you trim this to something like "SINGLE 1 and SINGLE 2 were released as singles"... it's a bit wordy as is.
- "was produced by Ian Broudie and by Bill Drummond and David Balfe." - overuse of "and", etc.
- "author Chris Adams said that in 1980 Creem magazine had written" - took me a while to work out what was being said here... perhaps "in 1980 Cream magazine wrote..." or another reword?
- "Although Sergeant was less happy and said" - starting a sentence with "although" is weird...
- "the following year, 1990." - you say 1989 last sentence, so you don't need to say the year here... it's pretty clear.
- The Commons template isn't really appropriate, and does MTV have permission to post up those lyrics (otherwise copyvio issues)?
The rest seems good! giggy (:O) 11:52, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
