Talk:Crescent Girls' School
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This article's tone is too informal. It is also somewhat subjective. Furthurmore, the neutrality of the article raises quite a bit of concern.
"Crescentians certainly are easily identifiable"
"In December 1990, the school moved to temporary premises at Queensway to enable the rebuilding of Crescent Girls' School on its cherished old site."
"The latter is particularly due to their unbelievably impressive screaming ability"
There is some poor grammar.
"The school debate team is also one of the tops in the B Division."
Perhaps someone can clean it up. Thanks.
