Talk:Confessions Part II

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March 28, 2008 Good article nominee Listed

[edit] GAN on hold

  • "is a song recorded by R&B singer Usher, produced" - comma isn't necessary in the context of this sentence. Use "and" instead
    • Is it grammatically correct if its like this: "Usher, and ..."? --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  • "believing that Usher is speaking the truth" - needs rewording..."is speaking the truth" is awkward, and you should be in past tense
    • Changed to "was asserting". --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  • Was there a "Confessions Part I"? Mention in lead if yes
    • Yes, there is. --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  • "lesser success compared to" --> "lesser success than"
    • Fixed. --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  • "Years after the" - how many?
    • Done. --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  • 3rd paragraph of Background and theme has too much quoting
    • I removed not so important part. --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  • "Besides from the "cheating" rumors" --> "Alongside the "cheating" rumors"
    • Fixed. --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  • "The song was nominated for Best R&B/Soul, Male at the 2005 Soul Train Music Awards" - no other awards or anything like that? Short paragraph :(
    • Added info during the 2005 ASCAP. --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  • They were playing this soooo much in Australia. Much more than other #5s. Meh, it's a good song.

And you know what to do when done! dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 10:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, it is. You should have bought lots of copies of this for it to reach number one. hehe. Thanks for the review. --Efe (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
Passed. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 23:03, 28 March 2008 (UTC)