Talk:Concept of death and adjustment

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This article has too many headings and subheadings per MoS. Most of the subheadings could be combined under the relevant headings. The result, IMHO, would be a better literary flow and a more encyclopedic style. Sincerely, Mattisse 14:49, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

What's with the 'adult' having to deal with death - and complete absence of a childs knowledge of their mortality, i think this is a blaring omission that needs to be rectified - thanks!

Much of this reads like a self-help book translated into English via babelfish. Some of the sections are so poorly written their meaning is obscure. Could someone with some expertise in the field look at this and perhaps rewrite it into comprehensible English? --NellieBly (talk) 08:56, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

I have started the rewriting. As I have the text book on the subject and I am from the discipline of Behavioral science I believe I will be able to do the scientific duty. For English language improvement I have invited an American PhD Psychologist who edits at wiki. Shoovrow (talk) 08:59, 21 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] wikilinks

I had to unlink some as they did not go to appropriate article. Mattisse (Talk) 16:01, 12 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Who is Aries?

I can't figure it out! Mattisse (Talk) 17:45, 12 March 2008 (UTC)