Talk:Colleen Patrick-Goudreau

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All but the first paragraph of this article is written from a non-NPOV and is basically autobiographical. The subject seems to be reasonably notable, but if the article isn't tidied up and sourced then it will need to be severely trimmed. StuartDouglas 13:03, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

Agreed. I deleted this initially, but accepted that notability was probably adequate. I removed the worst(!) of the self-promotion and spam, but I don't know enough about the subject to clean it up more, and i'm not inclined to do the research. jimfbleak 13:21, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

Seems fair to give the original author a week or so to clean it up, but if there's no revision I'll delete all the non-neutral stuff - which will reduce it to a stub unfortunately StuartDouglas 13:25, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Edited Article

As the original editor's changes still seemed very non-encyclopedic, I've had a go at stripping out some stuff and rejigging the article to present just the facts. Comments anyone? StuartDouglas 10:13, 21 March 2007 (UTC)