Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Whole grain

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[edit] Whole grain

While I believe this person is doing their level best to serve the knowledge of the readers here, the tone and format they have chosen is not appropriate for an encyclopedia, in addition to grand grammar and syntax problems. Perhaps the author is guilty of publishing original thought, but I doubt he/she is the the first breadmaker on Earth, and the information is probably not unique. Could this somehow be rewritten in encyclopedic context or does it need to be excised entirely? Noir sur blanc 18:37, 19 January 2006 (UTC)

I'm on it. I'm going to try to include many of the good suggestions on the talk page into the main article as well as find some external references.

At the moment I agree the article is very confusing to read, I'll have a go at fixing that as well Grandwazir 22:56, 25 January 2006 (UTC)