Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Paramount Canada's Wonderland

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[edit] Paramount Canada's Wonderland

The article is decent, but can be much better. Tone is occasionally too formal. Attractions section could be cleaned up, and Renamed Attractions, Restaurants and Stores is really bad (refers to sections of the park that don't exist; badly organized, format, etc.; stuff like "Spinovator in Med was called Quixote's Kettles. It was renamed during the 1998 season." is bad -- what's Med?)

• Update I made a few revisions awhile back, but I don't know what parts are too formal. I'd like some more specific instances of low-quality in the article, most of it looks pretty good to me. What's lacking to make it a good article is more references. The ikiroid (talk·desk·Advise me) 19:15, 2 October 2006 (UTC)

Added to User:Ikiroid/Desk RJFJR 02:14, 20 July 2006 (UTC)