Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Italian unification copyedit

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[edit] Italian unification copyedit

Peano, Bosnian crisis, Joel Higgins, and Italian unification, are all pages that have been listed as needing copyeditting for a while on Open Tasks with no change. --Dmcdevit 00:40, 20 Apr 2005 (UTC)

Placed on User:Katefan0/Desk (this is a long one, Katefan0!). — Knowledge Seeker 07:03, 20 Apr 2005 (UTC)
Woo! Might as well jump in with both feet! · Katefan0(scribble) 12:07, Apr 20, 2005 (UTC)
  • Largely finished. Major copyedits throughout, some restructuring of the top fourth of the article. I have referred this to Tony Sidaway for a second look. · Katefan0(scribble) 22:07, Apr 20, 2005 (UTC)
    • Added a photo of one of the main revolutionaries this afternoon. · Katefan0(scribble) 17:45, Apr 21, 2005 (UTC)

I'm sure the copy-editing was well done, but this article is in awful shape. It is full of inaccuracies and half-truths. I've put a clean-up tag (back?) on it, and am going to try to go over it in the next few days. john k 01:37, 21 August 2005 (UTC)

Please, by all means. I had no external sources and knew nothing about the issue, so all I could really do was clean up what was there from a copyediting standpoing. · Katefan0(scribble) 01:44, August 21, 2005 (UTC)