Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Creatures of Magic: The Gathering

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[edit] Creatures of Magic: The Gathering

Needs significant work to bring it upto standard - inuniverse, listcruft, no context for general readers. --Charlesknight 18:16, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

I left this comment yesterday at the article but it is worth reprinting here

This article needs a significant re-write - It's in-universe, it's list cruft, it makes no sense at all to a general reader. look at one of the first sentences -

Mistform Ultimus is a Legendary creature from Legions (What's legions?), and reprinted as a timeshifted (What's time shifted?) card in Time Spiral (What's time spiral?), that has every creature type (what's a creature type?) ever printed in Magic.

Wikipedia is a general readers encyclopedia not a guide for hardcore fans. --Charlesknight 23:44, 13 November 2006 (UTC)

I have been fixing incorrect spelling and things like that.

Did a massive cleanup of grammar and spelling. Still some places that need smoothing over. --DBishop¹⁹⁸⁴ 17:15, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

Looks much better. RJFJR 13:05, 27 September 2007 (UTC)

Closed RJFJR 13:05, 27 September 2007 (UTC)