Talk:Clarence Birdseye
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[edit] Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:
- Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
- Photograph should be added from a source with a free license, if available
- Some basic biographical information required, including education details, any information on family, details of death
- Lead needs expanding to cover all aspects of the subject's life and work
- Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
- Information on work and inventions should be expanded and references required
- References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format. In particular, an explicit third-party reference for the claim to be the founder of the frozen food industry is required
- External links present which could be used to expand article
Espresso Addict 21:18, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
