Talk:Clara Beranger
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[edit] Thanks
Clara and I thank you, I am sure now that I am looking for it, I will find more information about her. I haven't even TOUCHED the L A TIMES archives which I am sure will have some lovely stuff. EraserGirl (talk) 17:12, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Reassessment
Sorry it took so long to get back to this. After looking back over the article and comparing it to the criteria for B class film bios, I can't find a reason not to raise the quality assessment. The article is well written and well referenced. I might suggest considering moving the "Mrs. DeMille" section down to the bottom under a "Personal life" heading and expand slightly the death portion, perhaps adding, if it's available, where she is buried. My only comment about any of it is that "Mrs. DeMille" confused me for a moment, I suppose since it immediately made me think she was married to Cecil (which may well be my own bias). Wildhartlivie (talk) 05:24, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
