Talk:Claire Phillips

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[edit] Stubs

Is it really necessary to have that many stubs???? --Dysepsion 07:32, 2 December 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Citations

Most of the article is accurate based on the work cited (I just finished reading Ghost Soldiers) except for one thing: it would be more accurate to say that the code name "High Pockets" refers to her brassiere, into which she stashed secret notes (chapter 7 of cited book). Also, about 2/3 of the way through the article, the typo Cabanatuan Cuty should be Cabanatuan City.

[edit] Cleanup - August 2007

• Article needs cleanup. Some rewriting, longer intro, possibly an infobox and if possible a photo. I will come back to this. --Lendorien 20:06, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

• Rewrote the article in a better, more encyclopedic tone as well as providing more accurate details. Needs to be better sourced. Also is something of an orphan. --Lendorien 08:50, 15 August 2007 (UTC)