Talk:CityTeam Ministries

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This reads more like an ad for their website than an impartial encyclopaedic entry. particulary the second paragraph: "By partnering with CityTeam , you're not just helping a homeless person off the street and moving them toward rehabilitation - you're helping transform a life, heal a family, bring reconciliation and break the cycle of destructive behavior or poverty - from generation to generation. It is about reaching out to one person at a time to help meet their immediate needs and introduce them to the hope that only God can provide - so they can truly make real changes in their life. Real Life - Real Hope - Real Change". This should be reworded to be more neutral and less biased. 99.231.156.242 06:52, 1 October 2007 (UTC)

That's because it is copied from ther website at http://www.cityteam.org/about/ -- Whpq (talk) 16:10, 28 February 2008 (UTC)