Talk:CircuitLogix

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Hi, this page shouldn't be delete as I don't think its spam. I redirected a another spelling of CircuitLogix to this page. Black Harry 20:12, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Advertisement

Hi Carl. Sorry if it wasn't intentional but I thought the article sounded a bit too self-promotional. You may want to read http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WP:NOT#SOAPBOX The "Features" and "Component library" sections are too detailed for an encyclopedia and are unnecessary, for example. The first couple paragraphs also need re-organizing, you may want to add more sections. Statements like "The results have been very encouraging. Not only have students grades improved significantly as a result of using this software, but it has also removed a very divisive issue from the classroom" also need citations. Roger 03:18, 9 May 2007 (UTC)

I see an attempt was made to fix this article, but it still sounds too much like an advert. A few examples:

• "CircuitLogix was created to respond to demand from educators and students for a free electronics simulation product"
• "The student version is made available at no cost to students and is intended purely as a learning resource to improve the student's knowledge and understanding of electronics."
• "Simpson recognized that students who were financially disadvantaged and unable to purchase electronics simulation software were achieving poorer grades than their counterparts who were able to purchase such products. In response to this unfair situation..."
• etc.

-Roger (talk) 00:29, 12 February 2008 (UTC)