Talk:Christopher Dodd presidential campaign, 2008

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[edit] Rigors of Campaign

Even though I disagree with Senator Dodd on almost every issue I wrote this article for a reason much more important than Dodd. I wrote this article to demonstrate the rigors of the campaign schedule that all candidates face. I wanted to show what it was like to be on the campaign trail.--STX 06:07, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Manchester IA vs NH

You might want to double check your info for Sept. 3rd. There's a Waterloo NH and IA too. -- Kendrick7talk 22:27, 27 November 2007 (UTC)

I checked the source and it is correct. I got mixed up on the June 3 Debate but everything else should be right.--STX 22:36, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
OK, I removed the tags; but the WaPo source has him in both IA and NH at noon and then in NH at 3:30 and in IA at 6:30 on Sept. 3rd. So this looks a little flaky, but we're only as good as our sources. Kendrick7talk 22:51, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
I really think this is a duplication error on the part of WaPo, as Sept 4th for Iowa is a duplicate of Sept 3rd. -- Kendrick7talk 23:01, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
It probably is, I'll try to find another source.--STX 23:03, 27 November 2007 (UTC)

Yes it is duplicated [1] Thanks for pointing that out.--STX 23:07, 27 November 2007 (UTC)

Thanks, I was suspicious, but wrong about the city confusion. Having grown up in San Antonio, my brain had originally allocated a total of about 15 cells to keep track of city names. Been in Boston for a decade now, and there are still cities in New England, even relatively nearby, that I hear about for the first time on at least a weekly basis. So forgive me, as a former South Texan, for presuming a cultural bias here. -- Kendrick7talk 23:51, 27 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Political positions

Political positions should be at the top. There'd be no point in a campaign if he didn't have any positions, and it's what a lot of readers are going to be looking for first off. -- Kendrick7talk 20:20, 6 December 2007 (UTC)

Alright I see what you're saying but I think it flows better the other way.--STX 20:24, 6 December 2007 (UTC)
Sorry, I moved it again before I saw your addendum. I think his positions are more important that where he was on such and such a day. I imagine most of the other campaign articles have the candidate's positions at or near the top as well, though I haven't checked. -- Kendrick7talk 20:32, 6 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Bbcnews24 bhuttokilled.jpg

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BetacommandBot (talk) 06:03, 2 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Photos of other candidates

I'm wondering why there are so many photos of Dodd's political opponents on this page. I know that he has ended his bid, but it seems unfair to put photos (essentially advertising) of these folks on his article. This practice doesn't seem to be followed in Hillary or Obama's articles. I just wanted to check in before I remove these photos.--RedShiftPA (talk) 01:46, 8 January 2008 (UTC)

Photos are not advertisments. As was previously said this article is encompassing the whole election and its just strictly from Dodd's perspective but not about Dodd entirely. This is a unique and innovative take that has never been tried before. All images illustrate the election by the month relating to Dodd but in the end you get a sense of the whole election. It is much like a list showing the rigors of the campaign trail; the images illustrate the rigors. Think about it from the perspective of 10 years from now, all facets of Dodd's campaign are covered but the whole sense of the election is also felt. --STX 02:02, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
I agree with the idea of giving a broader view of the race, and I shouldn't have referred to these photos as advertising. To refine my point, I don't think putting stock images in this article add anything to the article, or anything to the sense of the campaign. In 10 years people will say "Oh, there's Hillary's stock photo." Now, if there are any photos of Dodd arguing with Hillary, that would be very good.
  • For example, the Paul_Simon_2007 photo wasn't from a Dodd rally. It was him playing with Thomas Dolby.
  • Image:Firefighter_with_axe photo is just some guy in a fireman outfit.
  • Image:Steve_Martin.jpg is Steve Martin in 1982 promoting "Dead Men Don't Wear Plaid" —Preceding unsigned comment added by RedShiftPA (talk • contribs) 02:27, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
These images are the best that we have. If you could find a free-use image of Dodd campaigning with Paul Simon or Dodd arguing with Hillary Clinton then those would be better replacements. However the images that are there still serve to illustrate the point intentioned. Much like on a list, you have the images that illustrate what the list consists of regardless of what they may be showing in reality, this is how this article works. In 10 years everybody may forget about John Edwards especially someone too young to remember him, but when they read about his advertisment war with Dodd and then they look up at the image of Edwards they will have a face to place with the name. That's just one small aspect that makes this article special.--STX 02:51, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

I removed the photos that are not Chris Dodd-related. User User:Southern Texas seems to be experimenting with a new format for this article. I don';t think that is appropriate for this article. I returned it to the standard wikipedia format.--RedShiftPA (talk) 23:23, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with the use of photos here. I think STX has done a good job finding images which could be used here. Anyway, I already revert you. -- Kendrick7talk 23:26, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia is not for you to write an article and then fit in all the possible fotos that could remotely be connected with the subject matter. You can do that on your own website. Next thing you know we have an article with hundreds of pictures. Re-adding the removed pictures is considered vandalism. You have been warned. --Datang (talk) 14:05, 15 January 2008 (UTC)

With the aim of clarity, let's use the active voice, Datang. You consider that re-adding the removed pictures is vandalism. You have warned Southern Texas or Kendrick7 or somebody.
Well, I've re-added the photographs. You may wish to consider this re-addition vandalism. But before doing so, you'd be well advised to read up on what vandalism means hereabouts.
There may indeed be too many photos. I'm open to arguments that there are. However, your edit summary Nice try sneaking back all the unnecessary pictures in. If you want to advertise your candidate, go make your own website. seems to imply that Dodd is somebody's candidate. This seems unlikely, as right now Dodd is, I believe, nobody's candidate. Further, declaring this without very good reason may contravene "WP:AGF". -- Hoary (talk) 15:14, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
Indeed, looking over the photos, ~half seem to be worthwhile, while some are really not helpful. I don't see why it's all or nothing, I'm going to restore some. WilyD 15:59, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
That's a start. Better, since there seems to be some disagreement, discuss which photos are better cut, and then cut them. -- Hoary (talk) 16:02, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
I agree with WilyD. In particular, unrelated images of celebrities and other candidates do not seem helpful or necessary. Pictures of Dodd on the campaign trail, however, are perfectly acceptable. — Satori Son 16:11, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
I've restored all the ones I thought were relevant (except the one restored by User:Satori Son, but I agree with their assessment that the image they restored is appropriate. WilyD 16:12, 15 January 2008 (UTC)

I've reverted the removal of all the images again. Not sure why this keeps occurring. -- Kendrick7talk 21:55, 15 February 2008 (UTC)

Probably carelessness - someone keeps inserting a stack of irrelevant images, someone purging the junk may not notice the baby in the bathwater. WilyD 22:00, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
The images aren't just random. They serve a purpose by providing information in captions and linking to different articles. That is the function of a list. I will restore them. --STX 00:19, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
I think the maps and the other candidates are fine. I can take or leave the fireman, as their union was one of Dodd's more notable supporters in the campaign. I know the style STX is going for is a little more World Book than Britannica but I don't really have a problem with it unless you can point to something in our own WP:STYLE guidelines supporting their exclusion. Besides, you're removing captions with info relevant to the article. -- Kendrick7talk 20:19, 17 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Peer Review Request for this article

I tagged this article for peer review to see what some other editors thought about the format and focus of this article. Click here for the results.--RedShiftPA (talk) 03:54, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] GA Review

Hello. I found this to be a very interesting article that is within reach of becoming GA. Please consider taking the following guidelines into account:

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

# Is it well written?

I find the article to be an interesting read, but the prose is neither engaging nor really "hooking" at all. The bulk of the articles seems to focus on what Dodd did and where, how he campaigned and why, and there are too many quotes from Dodd himself. Also, I would make use of pronouns and stop consistently reffering to Dodd as "Dodd" in every sentence. The tables in every section chronicling campaign events are odd, but I suppose informative. The little blurbs at the bottoms of the tables need to be expanded to not only encompass Dodd himself during the campaign and his quotes, but I would even include monetary numbers (if available), staffing information, etc. Bu they are very good in giving specifics for the months.
With the MOS, I would keep to one date format. There is one usage of 22 May but later December 26. I would go for the month, day style as it is the United States preference.

# Is it factually accurate?

Citations are a biggie in this article. There are many uncited statements and every quote needs a cite. The entire "political positions" section needs to be cited, as well as the sections "February 2007", "May 2007", "June 2007", "July 2007", "September 2007", last paragraph in "October 2007", "November 2007" and "December 2007". Without citations, the information is unverifiable. I appologize for not getting into specifics, but there are too many to specify.
References 3 and 4 are dead links, and reference 15 is cited to a blog.

# Is it broad in its coverage?

To a good extent, yes. It covers the Dodd campaign. I would have it focus less on what Mr. Dodd is saying, however, and go into the actual workings of the campaign.

# Is it NPOV?

To a great extent, this article follows the NPOV policy. However, the criticism section only contains two sentences with one criticism from commentator Bill O'Reilly. I'm sure more people criticised Dodd and his campaign; see if there were any about the running/ function of the campaign or be sure to include criticisms from the other candidates (or eleborate on them in that section).

# Is it stable?

Yes.

# Are there images?

Yes. The only thing I would say is to move the first image of Dodd (which I presume is the Senatorial portrait) to the right and that is per the MOS. It would be best to place it in the infobox and I think you might be able to have two in there.

Anyway, I think these problems can be solved within a week. I will check back then and feel free to notify me in the meantime. Best, Happyme22 (talk) 04:31, 19 January 2008 (UTC)

I think I addressed most of the problems above. Tomorrow or later tonight I will add more information about the campaign workings itself and I will expand the "criticism" section. Thank you for your suggestions if there is anything else that needs to be cleared up or that I forgot to complete please let me know.--STX 23:38, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
I decided to incorporate the criticism section into the campaign developments section since there was some other criticism already there. I added all the fundraising totals, strategies and some inner workings of the campaign. Is it ready? --STX 05:37, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
I like it a lot better! Just a few more minor specifics:
  • The head-to-head figures are a year old and it woulds help if the numbers are updated (if they can be) N Not done, No other head-to-head matchups exist
  • In political positions, "Dodd has proposed mandatory community service for all high school students, and fought to improve child care and health care. He has worked to stop predatory lending by credit card companies" needs cited. Y Done
Once these minors are fixed, I'll promote. Happyme22 (talk) 06:47, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
Thank you very much for your help.--STX 18:33, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
Passed! Great work! Happyme22 (talk) 21:11, 20 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Compromise version

A compromise version that satisfies everybody's concerns can be found at User:Southern Texas/Sandbox.--STX 00:58, 18 February 2008 (UTC)