Talk:Chrissy Bray

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[edit] NPOV

The title says it all, really. This page really needs attention; wiki should be neutral, not sycophantic. -- (triptogenetica)  (talkpage)  12:00, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

• I've re-added the {{POV-check}} tag...it had been removed by the author, but this article is a long way from reaching NPOV, and may be an attractive target for deletion in its current state. --Bugwit grunt / scribbles 14:18, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

Page has been edited in order to conform with NPOV. It is now written from a neutral point of view and is without bias. Please consider removng POV check from this page. BTW what is triptogenetica? I can find no reference to it. --Mikepurdy 23:00, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

• The article still reads very much like promotional material: "From television to radio to huge live events, Chrissy has been there", and "As Australia’s only female warm up comic, she is in high demand," definitely convey a point of view. (The second quote also needs some sort of citation if its to be kept in any form...is she the only one?). Also, I'm not sure what's meant by "...performs electro famed melodic stylings...", but the "famed" part strikes me as not having a NPOV. I'd be happy to try to help improve the article, but without any knowledge of the subject, it would probably be best left to someone else who does have knowledge. --Bugwit grunt / scribbles 23:26, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

The page has been further edited to deal with the issues you have raised. Please consider removng POV check from this page. BTW what is triptogenetica? I can find no reference to it.

Mike, are you really the author of the pictures you've uploaded? It looks like you've taken them from chrissybray.com. Conscious 06:38, 10 June 2006 (UTC)

Conscious, I am the creator of these pictures and as certified have released them into the public domain. If you view the source code meta data of the chrissybray.com index page you will see this line of code: !--Built by Mike Purdy and the FishReading Team. Copyright Chrissy Bray--.