Talk:Chippendales dancers

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The article needs substantial editing: there are spelling mistakes, ambiguous pronouns ("... Banerjee enlisted ex-con Ray Colon. He wanted ..."), etc.

The article consists mostly of sentences that are short and choppy ("The man was an FBI informant."), or wordy, flowery and sentimental ("An ever devoted family man, Banerjee took his own life by hanging himself in his cell during the early morning hours ..."). In short, it reads like a popular true crime paperback.

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[edit] Banerjee article

I think this Banerjee person should get his own entry, for the Chippendales article is more about him than the dancers themselves.

[edit] Origin of the name

Hope someone knows where the name came from. Was it from a town, or is there any connection with the furniture-maker? 217.166.94.1

Alledgely it comes from the Chippendale-style furniture present at the original club though this may very well be apocryphal. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.181.55.239 (talk) 13:24, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Chippendales article

I think this article is fine under Chippendales, but if it is under Chippendale dancers, then the article should be about the current/past dancers, not the origins of Chippendales.