Talk:Charlestown High School
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This page gives a quick overview of the Charlestown High School. It was modelled after the Belaire Texas High School page, but with the details changed to corresponds to Charlestown High School.
What else should we put in this article?
What do other high school pages have? Are there any pages for other Boston area high schools?
The entry looks pretty good, but it needs some more editing.
Here editing the first paragraph.
Ali, do you have a picture of the gym where u play basketball? I'm gonna edit the second and third paragraphs too.
So far, this is looking good. Maybe you could add the school's phone number so people that read this know that this is legit.
Ali i have edited the last paragraph but may you should try and add the name of the team and names of the player that are part of that team. MAybe even add picture of the flag of this school.
Made a link that has this year players names. Images of the school is hard to find.
Guys, help me find an image of the school. Guys i found the an image of the school. Sorry guys the image was not good enough but i think its ok with an image too.
- There are a number of other Boston-area(ish) schools, refer to the category link at the foot of the main Charlestown High School article. Might I suggest two other resources for improving this article? Wikipedia:WikiProject Schools is an association of Wikipedians focused on the improvement of school articles. There is also BEEFSTEW which is a good guideline for the creation of interesting articles. If you run into problems please feel free to contact anyone at Wikipedia:WikiProject_Schools and they will be happy to be of assistance. Bahn Mi 19:56, 5 May 2005 (UTC)
- The article looks better than before guys, it look good we impove.
- Sorry, but nothing has changed. [1] The article needs grammatical improvements amongst other things, so the {{cleanup}} tag has been reinserted. Please familiarize yourself with the links I posted here yesterday. Bahn Mi 20:36, 6 May 2005 (UTC)
- I've made some grammatical improvements, but haven't had a chance to read all of the links posted. Which do you think are most relevant for this particular page?
- The current version looks pretty good. It mentions the national role that the school played in the Forced Busing controversy. This historical connection gives it a timelessness which is appropriate for wikipedia. Finally, the separators make it more structured. Perhaps the ephemeral information should be "as of" dated (e.g. principal's name ....)tjhickey 16:43 UTC 5/13/05
- Sorry, but nothing has changed. [1] The article needs grammatical improvements amongst other things, so the {{cleanup}} tag has been reinserted. Please familiarize yourself with the links I posted here yesterday. Bahn Mi 20:36, 6 May 2005 (UTC)
