Talk:Charles John Vaughan

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[edit] Scandal at Harrow section

Not having read the book in question (or knowing anything about CJ Vaughan) I can't speak to the factual accuracy of this section, but the tone of the section is not encyclopedic. It reads more like a tell-all than it does as an encyclopedia article, and the amount of text in the section greatly overshadows the rest of this article, despite the fact that Vaughn's time at Harrow represents 15 years out of the 80 that he lived. I suggest that this section be edited for length and tone. Portions of this section could also be moved to the page for Harrow. RainbowCrane 00:56, 7 August 2006 (UTC)