Talk:Charlemagne Tower

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[edit] Initial Issues

This profile of Charlemagne Tower seems to have mixed together elements of the life of Charlemagne Tower Sr., lawyer and mining magnate, with the events of his son's life, Charlemagne Tower Jr., ambassador. I'll have a go at sorting it out when I have a chance.MarmadukePercy (talk) 02:41, 31 March 2008 (UTC) I'd also like to have a go at explaining how someone came by the name Charlemagne! lol MarmadukePercy (talk) 00:20, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

Excellent job on reworking this page! Many thanks!MarmadukePercy (talk) 22:40, 4 April 2008 (UTC)

Just to let everyone know, I'm in the midst of working up a complete overhaul of this article. I want to go more into his early law practice, activites in PA, what he did during the Civil War, etc. Hope to have it up in a few days. Bowie60 (talk) 11:29, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Complete Overhaul

Well, what do you think?  :) Bowie60 (talk) 19:51, 23 May 2008 (UTC)

Looks great. My only suggestion would be at least a mention in passing of Tower's abiding interest in his family's early Massachusetts roots. Otherwise, very nice! Regards,MarmadukePercy (talk) 20:07, 23 May 2008 (UTC) As far as I know the only book Tower authored was his "Tower Genealogy" published posthumously.MarmadukePercy (talk) 21:47, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
After scanning it the only thing that is sore to the eye is those cap locked sentences, Tazz (talk) 23:23, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
Great work on the article! As someone who is experienced in producing WP:GA and WP:FL content, I would recommend using inline citations for your references. See WP:Citing sources for more details. But keep it up, you are on the right track! Cheers! RyguyMN (talk) 04:30, 11 June 2008 (UTC)