User talk:Cesevern

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--Storm Rider ^(talk) 04:43, 9 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints

Thank you for your recent edits on the article. You might want to reconsider the list format (a, b, etc), which is generally not well received on Wikipedia. Also, I think the point is that the Father speaks "through" Christ, rather than that Christ speaks for the Father. Best wishes. WBardwin (talk) 22:41, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Thanks. I will change to "through". Good catch.Cesevern (talk) 22:51, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

Your recent edits are a bit POV, by saying the church has "returned to the original church" as fact. You are also adding a bit too much doctrinal detail to an article that is meant to be a general overview. I am worried that the article is getting too bloated. If you want to add details on the Godhead, I would recommend editing the Godhead (Latter Day Saints) article instead. Bytebear (talk) 01:24, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Congrats!

The Christianity Barnstar

		The Christianity Barnstar
		For your valuable additions to Christian articles, specifically those concerning the LDS Church. Keep up the good work! Eustress (talk) 02:53, 5 April 2008 (UTC)