Talk:Cathy Young

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I don't know whether the initial sentence should say she's a columnist, she's a journalist, she's a novelist, or what. I got VERY impatient after reading two or three sentences of this very annoying article. Why is it telling me when she relocated to where and what colleges she attended before saying in what role she became notable enough to be the topic of an article? I expect to get that first---almost always in the first sentence. I expect to be told Albert Enstein was a physicist BEFORE reading 82 paragraphs about the details of his education and tastes. Michael Hardy 19:04, 15 September 2006 (UTC)

I tried to add a little more informative info on the opening section. Master shepherd 03:06, 7 December 2006 (UTC)