Talk:Catholic Residential Youth Work

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There are numerous problems with this article. It is completely unreferenced, contains peacock phrases ("an important and dynamic part..."), uses much non-encyclopedic phrasing ("a useful catch-all"; "of course with God"; "so to speak"). The general tone is entirely positive and uncritical, implying that encouraging children's belief in the Catholic religion is necessarily a good thing. The article needs a major rewrite from someone familiar with the topic. --OpenToppedBus - Talk to the driver 15:27, 18 September 2007 (UTC)