Talk:Castle Hill, Ipswich, Massachusetts

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[edit] Tone

On 10 September 2006, Elonka indicated that the tone of this article was not appropriate for an encyclopedia. Aside from a very few phrases like "she called his cards", most of it seems to me to be very well written. I would request that anyone who questions tone, be specific, here on the talk page, as to the changes that are needed, as is suggested by the {{tone}} template. Bejnar 19:08, 27 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Tone

Ideed. What, specifically, "is not written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article" in this piece at present?