Talk:Carro Armato P 40

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[edit] Grammar and Style

Under the History Section, 5th paragraph down, first sentence: Does anybody understand what he/she is trying to convey?

"As an interesting change of needs/priorities the number of machine guns were lowered from four to two." I think. --Sus scrofa 17:20, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Aug 2007 Copyedit tag

I've tried copyediting the text and if someone else could look it over I think the tag could be removed--Sus scrofa 00:39, 18 August 2007 (UTC)