Talk:Carlos Castillo-Chavez

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Whilst it may be factually accurate so far as it goes, the neutrality of the article needs stringent scrutiny, due to apparent cause for concern related to a possible conflict of interest.

Specifically the author may be close to the subject. Even with a renowned and highly acclaimed subject, this may lead to non-neutral editing unless careful. A check by neutral editors is probably a good way to ensure Wikipedia standards are in fact complied with.

FT2 (Talk | email) 04:26, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

I have edited some passages and re-written them in a more encyclopedic tone, added some secondary sources, and some bibliography. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 05:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
"He is acclaimed for his work on enhancing prospects for academic success and providing research opportunities at the interface of the biological, computational, and mathematical sciences from the undergraduate to graduate and postdoctoral levels to underrepresented groups."
This statement is sourced from Castillo-Chavez's own description of himself, and reads like a promotion text. Probably needs review and rewriting. And a neutrality check on the text as a whole - factual but is it balanced in the sense that this is how other reliable sources and biographies represent him too? Worth a quick check. FT2 (Talk | email) 05:05, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
I see you have fixed this already.... ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 15:40, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
The promo-style quote yes. The balance/NPOV/secondary sources issue, not touched yet and needs more eyeballs and checking. FT2 (Talk | email) 03:10, 4 March 2008 (UTC)