Talk:Busch Gardens Howl-O-Scream Tampa Bay

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[edit] Clean-Up

This article is going to need a major clean-up if it's going to be kept. One example of it getting cleaned-up is that the info in the article should be revised and rearranged so it dosen't look sloppy. I really don't think rearranging the info by year was a good way for the creator of the article to start it. Also, Some typos are in the article, Which isn't good and should be corrected immediately. Article really needs a major tidy-up at once.--Universal Studios Number 1 Fan (talk) 23:59, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

There's also the fact that I worked for BGA in 2000, when it was still Busch Gardens Tampa, and the event was not named "Howl-O-Scream" until that year--I was a consultant on the project, and edited the Busch Bulletin employee newspaper. "Spooky Safari" ran in 1999, and while it was not a parkwide event, was publicized similarly, because it was all that was going on that year. The article as written makes it seem like it was part of a larger event. Reading it more closely, in fact, the whole thing reads remarkably similar to the style of the production idea notes written by one of my fellow consultants in 2000. I can't recommend merging, cleanup, and fact-checking strongly enough. P.F. Bruns (talk) 08:57, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Yes, this article does need clean up. I'm trying to help with it right now. Any help would be appreciated. It's a work in progress, and there's a lot left to do. It's really too big of a topic to be delted or merged with anything else. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 132.170.34.166 (talk) 04:04, 31 March 2008 (UTC)