Talk:Bruce Allen (manager)

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[edit] A few isuses

The bulk of this article is composed of complete transcripts of Bruce Allen's radio show, which doesn't seem in keeping with Wikipedia's style, and basically only gives his side of the story. Also, the "rebuttal" is especially hard to read because it's just one big block of text. Surely we can boil it down a little. Finally, no mention is made of Allen's work VANOC, which is a vital part of the context to Allen's remarks and the negative response they provoked. These are just a few thoughts for improving the article - I'll try to make some changes when I've got the time. -Father Inire 07:52, 27 September 2007 (UTC)

OK, I did a few changes... I haven't gotten around to summarizing the second transcript yet, though. Does anyone know where the transcripts originally came from? There's no source indicated. -Father Inire 08:34, 27 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Transcripts

I thought about editing the transcripts, but wanted to leave them intact, to ensure completeness and removal of any bias. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Factyou (talk • contribs) 09:21, 27 September 2007 (UTC)