Talk:Brighton High School (Rochester, New York)

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[edit] Article needs work

There are several apparently biased references, with an abundance of peacock terms in this article, for example: "Since the late 90s, a number of first-rate teachers have retired..." There are also some items of questionable noteworthiness, for example: names of language teachers. The article is also missing references and verifiable sources. The article should be cleaned up per WP:NPOV and Wikipedia:Manual of Style to produce an encyclopedic article. I will strive to improve this article over the next several days and would appreciate assistance from the Wikipedia community. Truthanado 00:30, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

I have cleaned up the article and removed most of the questionable noteworthiness and the WP:NPOV text. Although the article could still be further improved, I believe it no longer needs the tags. Therefore, being the one who originally added them, I have removed them. I suspect the Wikipedia community will edit this article and continue to improve it. Truthanado 03:09, 29 June 2007 (UTC)