Talk:Bowral, New South Wales

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[edit] Promotion

Removed "landscape luminaries such as Paul Sorrenson" unless reference can be made. Maybe i am uninformed about garden design but with the current length of this article a minor promotion such as this need not be included. Nsrma 22:55, 17 December 2005 (AESDST)

Sorensen is well-known to those interested in landscape design. Bowral is a good place to see his work as is the Blue Mountains. I have restored the reference to him.--A Y Arktos 20:39, 17 December 2005 (UTC)

not helped of course when his name is misspelt! He is the subject of a 1990 biography: Australia's master gardener : Paul Sorensen and his gardens--A Y Arktos 21:05, 17 December 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup

This article really needs a lot of cleanup. To start with I removed this sentence:

Bowral also has great facilties like a local skate park where many skate comps are held, it also ofers a movie thetre and a sleazy brothal just over in Berrima, a close by town.

This has at least five misspellings, a POV problem ("sleazy brothal" [sic]), and no references. Jpp42 05:32, 23 April 2007 (UTC)