Talk:Border Security Force
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The fourth paragraph in the article is highly misleading and is a produce of baseless thoughts. This paragraph very incorrectly states the reasons for the inception (yes, inception, rather than just induction) of BSF and the replacement of CRPF. The author has put forth erroneous and biased ideas while hiding the main reasons behind replacement of CRPF from Jammu and Kashmir, such as, the bulk of the CRPF being already committed to combating insurgency in Punjab and the North-Easter states, and unavailability of more manpower from CRPF. The experience and capabilities of the CRPF against Jihadis can be seen mentioned in the article meant for CRPF. Secondly, the BSF's greatest achievements surpass something like elimination of "Ghazi Baba" by great degrees. The author should be less biased, more factual, and even more specific - sticking strictly to the BSF, and mention factual and better instances regarding the achievements. Such as talking about those in the BSF who have/has been awarded the highly reputed Mahavir Chakra during Indo-Pak war.
To keep the article sound more specific, more factual and less erroneous, I am deleting the fourth misleading paragraph from this article.
The first point about the accuracy and objectivity of the removed paragraph was valid, however the paragraph is still required to provide the context which led to the BSF, a border force, being deployed in counter-insurgency operations. Therefore, a more neutral, edited version of the paragraph has been inserted.
Wrt the second point about the achievements of the BSF: historically speaking, the Indo-Pak war may indeed be considered more important. However, what is more relevant in recent times is the BSF's role in counter-insurgency. Also note that the existing article specifies the context wrt Ghazi Baba (prime success IN JAMMU AND KASHMIR). Given this, along with the fact that the December 13 suicide attack on the New Delhi parliament is viewed by many as comparable to 9/11 in terms of its gravity, the elimination of Ghazi Baba is an important point. Plucky77 22:43, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Article Improvement Needed
I added tags for weasel words and unsourced content to this article. I will try and find some documentation to fill the gaps when I can, but an article this in-depth with no sources and various usages of weasel words is a far from optimal situation here. Anyone else who wants to work on the topic is welcome to. Please do NOT remove the tags until the changes are made. Thank you. Bullzeye (Ring for Service) 04:45, 3 December 2007 (UTC)