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I wanted to ask the basis for the change to the statement
The Faces of Love, an episodic film that will explicitly depict the range of human sexual experience, including homosexuality and incest.
This is factually false in the sense that one of the core discussions in the book ends with the decision that The Faces of Love" will NOT include a homosexual scene. This is justified in a remarkable discussion by the heterosexual principals in which they decide they could not do such a scene justice as say Jean Genet could, ...
Invite contributor of change to expound, if not a reference to text of novel justifies a reversion to previous or rewrite to new formulation.