User talk:Blewis87

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Welcome!

Hello, Blewis87, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place {{helpme}} before the question. Again, welcome! The Rambling Man (talk) 07:19, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Self aligned gate

Hey Blewis87, sorry it's been a while but I was taken away by surprise for my birthday before I could respond to your request. So, a few quick comments...

  • Any chance of an image or an illustration?
  • You need a lead rather than an Introduction section. See WP:LEAD for pointers on how long it should be, what it should cover and how to format it.
  • You need to make the article accessible to non-experts if possible, either by explaining complex ideas and/or using wikilinks.
  • Be consistent with capitalising (e.g. Self-aligned gate vs Self-Aligned Gate).
  • Don't have a list of instructions for the process. If you want to describe the process, do it from the third person perspective.
  • Look at the {{convert}} template for how to get good, free conversions from Celsius to Fahrenheit for example.
  • Provide more references if possible.

Then consider taking the article to peer review with a mind for getting it to good article status. All the best, The Rambling Man (talk) 17:00, 13 April 2008 (UTC)