Talk:Birote

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[edit] Nov. 17th rewrite

I may have misinterpreted certain details in this rewrite, due to my unfamiliarity with the language, culture and geography in this article. If so, please accept my apology, it was not my intent to misinform anyone, and feel free to correct my mistakes, or to leave me a message telling me where I erred and, if you provide the correct information, I will make the corrections.

The section named "Birote Kalan and Khurd" originally (and still does) left two questions un-answered:

  • What is Birote Kalan, as opposed to simply "Birote"? and
  • What is "Khurd"?

It would help all readers if these items were clarified.

It should also be noted that this article does not cite any acceptable sources to verify the information. Any additions in this aspect would enhance this article's seriousness. JAXHERE | Prevaricate at me 13:07, 17 November 2006 (UTC)

Khurd = Small
Kalan = Big

Pahari Sahib 21:26, 14 March 2007 (UTC)


[edit] Copyedit notes

Hi! I am with the WP:LoCE and am giving your article a copyedit. I've done some major restructuring to the first half of the article, but all of the original information is still in the text. Some information I found questionable I've enclosed in hidden comments, preceded by COPYEDITOR'S NOTE. I've also included explanations of edits and questions/concerns in additional notes. Also, this article need sources desperately. Galena11 21:09, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

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  • Copyeditor(s): Galena11 04:36, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Hello! I want to let you know that I'm going to hold off on requesting a proofread of this article until the issues I raised are resolved. Thanks! Galena11 12:33, 26 October 2007 (UTC)