Talk:BerkShares

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[edit] Tone

This is an interesting article, but "The Purpose of BerkShares" section needs to be rewritten. It reads like a promotional blurb, and many of the assertions are not supported by references.

Acegikmo1 (talk) 21:19, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

I edited this section (and the following section, which I renamed to Emulation and Media Attention) to remove the promotional tone. I went ahead and took the tone tag off, although some more references would be helpful. Harry1717 (talk) 05:01, 13 May 2008 (UTC)